“I Eat You Eat I” (A Poem) NSFW

It is a vision
some would say
lacks grace:

our two sweaty bodies
coiled together
mouths and crotches
slurping
sucking
lapping
warm
and wet
and rockhard
or soft.

It is not love-making of the face to face sort
but more carnal
if only for its social awkwardness.

The vision recurs…

I remember your soft flesh
wet and musky
moving under my probing, stroking
tongue–
the feel of your lips teeth tongue
throat
engulfing my shaft, swallowing, tasting me.
Our bodies tight and heaving.
Lost in passion,
topsy turvy with love,
no up nor down to this lustful embrace,
this meal
as I eat you as
you eat me as
I eat you
as you eat me
as–

Some would say
it lacks, if not taste,
definitely grace.
‘Tis not tactful, to love so.

But to me, remembering,
there was eternity in the act,
a circle formed without seam
complete
two halves making a perfect roundness
rolling like a wheel
toward forever.
Like the worm Ouroboros
swallowing its snaking tail,
to me, if only me,
we formed an eternity.

To live,
we eat.

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4 comments on ““I Eat You Eat I” (A Poem) NSFW

  1. awakeningpsyche says:

    You handled it beautifully….by expressing every emotion….erotic, romantic and pure soul…:)

  2. I’ve never liked the actual THING that much that you describe but the way you describe it almost persuades me I was wrong not to! And I love the reference to Ouroboros! Has anyone read that book?

    • Tim Byrd says:

      Maybe you should revisit the act? ;)

      I think I read the Eddison book as a kid, but I don’t remember anything about it, so I’m not sure the memory is accurate. I may have just had it and not gotten to it.

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